教育部——the Ministry of Education
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As we all know, health is the foundation of life so if we could exercise an hour everyday we will have a better body condition to work and study well. The Ministry of Education also advice yang people especially the students better to exercise an hour everyday and also put forward the national student sports program,the slogan of the plan is: everyday exercise an hour, health work fifty years, a happy life for a lifetime. Especially the seniors three students ,they will facing the univercity entrance exam and need to go over everyday but no times to exercise.But in my opinions, I think even though the senior three students they are also should exercise but very need have it, one hands exercise can help we have a clear mind so that we will study well ,on the other hands exercise can cultivite their's outgoing personality ,it well have a good effect for our future.