2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(108):阳光体育活动

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者在句法层面做的很棒；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

As we all know, health is the foundation of life so if we could exercise an hour everyday we will have a better body condition to work and study well. The Ministry of Education also advice yang people especially the students better to exercise an hour everyday and also put forward the national student sports program,the slogan of the plan is: everyday exercise an hour, health work fifty years, a happy life for a lifetime. Especially the seniors three students ,they will face the univercity entrance exam and need to go over everyday but no times to exercise.But in my opinions, I think even though the senior three students they should also exercise but very need have it, on the one hand exercise can help us have a clear mind so that we will study well ,on the other hand exercise can cultivate their outgoing personality ,it well have a good effect for our future.