小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。

I still remember the day when I went to Shanwei.That is my first time to Shanwei and I got there with my family.Shanwei,which is a coastal city in the east of the Guangdong province.And the Red Bay is a beautiful place,there are many people got to there enjoy their vocation.I have a good holiday in Shanwei!