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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):The most interesting place

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:35浏览次数:16948
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题目:Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interesting place you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇,也能较准确地使用高级词汇。

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Recently,the nuclear power of China only have 2%,it is necessary for China to go a step further develop nuclear energy. The proportion of all the nuclear countries occupy 30th and nearly at the lowest level. After the nuclear power station explosion in march,2011 in Japan, After that,the development of the nuclear of China is halt , examined and approve the latest nuclear power station,and held a nationwide inspection in safty of nuclear. The date of October,2012,examination and approval was recovered cautiously. With the improvement of technology and security measures,the possibility of happening a nuclear accident can reach the lowest level.In the other words,we can developed and make full use of the nuclear energy.

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