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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11306
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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作者词汇表达较恰当,也能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误。

用户练习作文:

The giant panda is gentle animal,which has special black and white fur. Giant panda is very rare. The WWF have a special meanings for giant panda. The giant panda became the symbol of it since the WWF established in 1961. It is a rarest members in their range,and it mainly live in the south-western forest where in China。 Recently,there are about 1000 pandas in the world. This type of animals eat bamboo are threatened by other factors. Therefore,we assured the survival of the giant panda are very important than before.

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