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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8972
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
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文中从句数量过少;作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Starbucks is the name of a chain of a coffee company in America, it has nearly 21,300 stores worldwide throughout North America, South America, Europe, Middle East and the Pacific area. Starbucks' retail products including more than 30 of the world's top coffee beans, hand-made espresso and coffee, hot and cold beverages, rich variety of commodities such as coffee machine, coffee cup and so on. In addition to coffee, Starbucks also sells tee, bread, cakes, and other goods. Many of the company’s products are seasonal or specific to the locality of the store. Starbucks-brand ice cream and coffee are also sold at grocery stores. Starbucks' consumers mostly are foreigners, white-collar workers, and especially women. The age mostly in 20 to 45 years old. Foreigners account for about a quarter. In general, the main consumers are the young and the adults, and the class is given priority to with higher income, which mixed with some of the university students.

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