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Volunteers are growing very fast.China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work.What is the reason to volunteer to be a popular?Here are my reasons. Firstly,voluntary work has access to get along with a variety of different people.College Students can learn to get along with different people and ways and increase social experiences. Secondly,voluntary work gives the chance to take care of many elderly or orphans.It's good alleviating social pressure so that promoting social harmony.To bring love and care for vulnerable groups is what college students’s responsibility. Thirdly,voluntary work can make it easier to find a job.In the competition for jobs ,employer will consider your participation in social activities when you have the same condition with your competitors.Voluntary work is a big bargaining chip. Last but not least,let voluntary work become a trend so that more and more people will in.