可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累高级词汇。
Dear Christy, I'm so thrilled to know that you are going to visit my hometown and I can wait see you again.I miss everything that happened when I was in your hometown,and your parents and you were so kind to me that I will try my best this time to make you stay an enjoyable and memerable one. My hometown,changsha,is the capital of Hunan province and best known as the star city for its well developed entertainment industry and tourism.There are numerous place and attractions worth recommending,and Baiyun Summit is the first one that I would like to introduce to you.It has an exceedingly long history and its architecture is characteristic of Song Dynasty. I'm looking forward to your arrival.