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I have been at college for a year,and an important lesson I have learned is how to manage my time effectively. In my first semester at college,with so much free time,I manage it unwisely. I have never been to the library to study. What's worse,I spent lots of time in sleeping and watching TV. So at the end of the semester,I felt I have learned nothing. Back at home in the winter vacation,I was ashamed of myself when I found my friends lived a meaningful college life. Some of them studied hard every day,some friends took a part-time job,and some participated in a student society. They all made their college life colorful,but what have I done? With so much time I have wasted,I determined to manage my time wisely. In the following semester,I usually go to the library to study. What's more,I take a part-time job as well as my friends. I take full advantage of my free time. Of course,I also take a part of time to relax myself. I learned the importance of time management.
