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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8982
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分60.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;能够使用一些不错的从句;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,高级词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查。

用户练习作文:

As we all knows,we like to judge other people by their appearance .I want to point that is not a good habit,but we can't deny it compeletly,maybe the person who has a good appearance is more strict with themselves. We can see that people who has a better appearance will make a good schedu.They always have a good spirit ,they would also spend more time to do some sport,that is why they are always look active and happy.while someone looks like activeness may be the people who is ugly.But we can't always use this to judge every people ,becase some person also have good quality ,thongh they don't have beautiful face ,they always have a beautiful heart and warm others. Anyway,I think it is pretty rude to judge people with their face .We should have some communication with them,maybe you will find he/she is so kind people.

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