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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9057
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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可适当增加从句使用,注意极个别句子错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。

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With the development of society, learning on line has played an important role in our life. As a result of enthuisiam of thousands of fans,we participated in a debation concerning learning on line.Some people argued that the education on line meant to obtain information ,others thinked they prefer to obtain knowledge rather than do information.Aa far as I am concerned,ability is more important than information where we live.Once I learn how to use Google ,I will apply it . In a word,learning on line means application.

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