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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9030
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分81.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句法知识扎实,可适当增加长句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

With the development of society, learning on line has played an important role in our life. As a result of enthusiasm of thousands of fans,we participated in a debate concerning learning on line.Some people argued that learning on line meant to obtain information which other people had collected ,others thought they prefer to obtain knowledge rather than do information to be devoted to society.Aa far as I am concerned,ability is more important than information where we live,which has been confirmed too much. That's to say,once I learn how to use Google ,I will apply it to strengthen my ability. In a word,learning on line means application.The more you apply,the better your future will be.

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