Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文章词汇使用丰富度还要提高,高级词汇的积累上也要再接再厉。
With the development of society, learning on line has played an important role in our life. As a result of enthusiasm of thousands of fans,we participated in a debate concerning learning on line in which we usually meet.Some people argued that learning on line meant to obtain information which other people had collected for entertaintion , however,others thought they prefer to obtain knowledge rather than do information to be devoted to society and to promote themselves as well as to pay attention to others around them.Aa far as I am concerned,ability is more important than information where we live to live a better life,which has been confirmed too much. That's to say,once I learn how to use Google ,I will apply it to strengthen my ability promoting myself. In a word,learning on line means application.The more you apply,the better your future will be.