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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9032
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句。

用户练习作文:

With the development of society, learning on line has played an important role in our life. As a result of enthusiasm of thousands of fans,we participated in a discussion on learning on line in which we meet for the most.Some people argued that learning on line meant to obtain information which other people had collected for entertainment , however,others thought they prefer to obtain knowledge rather than do information to be devoted to society and to promote themselves as well as to pay attention to others around them.Aa far as I am concerned,ability is more important than information where we live to live a better life,which has been confirmed too much. That's to say,once I learn how to use Google ,I will apply it to strengthen my ability promoting myself. In a word,learning on line means application.The more you apply,the better your future will be.

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