Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Everyone has his own lifestyle.There is no wandering that old people have their beautiful life. I have a very kindful grandmother.She is always be happy.Comparing with the youth,she is more freedom and pleasant.As a older in Changsha,she is good at playing mah-jong.As long as she has time, she will go to friend's home to play mah-jong and chat with them for a long time. She also likes shopping.She always go to shopping with her friends.I know she is really enjoying buying new clothes.Every time I come to visit her,she would show her new clothes to me. When I say the clothes is good,she will very happy like a child. There are also some things displeased her,so she would talk with us to blame that things.After for a while she would forget that unhappy things. Because of the study,my collage is very far from where she live.It’s too far for me to go home frequently.So I call her more than once a week to show her my love and listen to her about her life. In my opinion,we youth should take good care of the old people.They are easy to feel satisfactory.Maybe they don’t need to a long time company,what they need just a phone call to show your concern.