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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误。

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Everyone has his own lifestyle.There is no wandering that old people have their beautiful life. I have a very kindful grandmother.She is always be happy.Comparing with the youth,she is more freedom and pleasant.As a older in Changsha,she is good at playing mah-jong.As long as she has time, she will go to friend's home to play mah-jong and chat with them for a long time. She also likes shopping.She always go to shopping with her friends.I know she is really enjoying buying new clothes.Every time I come to visit her,she would show her new clothes to me. When I say the clothes is good,she will very happy like a child. There are also some things displeased her,so she would talk with us to blame that things.After for a while she would forget that unhappy things. Because of the study,my collage is very far from where she live.It’s too far for me to go home frequently.So I call her more than once a week to show her my love and listen to her about her life. In my opinion,we youth should take good care of the old people.They are easy to feel satisfactory.Maybe they don’t need to a long time company,what they need just a phone call to show your concern.

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