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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Everyone has his own lifestyle.There is no wandering that old people have their beautiful life. I have a very kindly grandmother.She is always happy.Comparing with the youth,she is more free and pleasant.As an older in Changsha,she is good at playing mah-jong.As long as she has time, she will go to friends' home to play mah-jong and chat with them for a long time. She also likes shopping.She always goes shopping with her friends.I know she is really enjoying buying new clothes.Every time I come to visit her,she would show her new clothes to me. When I say the clothes are good,she wil bel very happy like a child. But there are some things displeased her,so she would talk with us to blame that things.After for a while, she would forget these unhappy things. Because of the study,my collage is very far from where she live.It’s too far for me to go home frequently.So I call her more than once a week to show her my love and listen to her about her life. In my opinion,we young people should take good care of the old people.They are easy to feel satisfactory.Maybe they don’t need to a long time company,what they need just a phone call to show your concern.
