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Saving money or be a moonlite,which the first one are my prefered.Nothing is more important than the fact that saving money in recent days.Compared with moonlite,saving money is more tational and sensible. It's generally recognized that we need save money against unexpected needs.For example,when you are serious ill or acute disease that we will realize the importance of saving money.Life is full of challenges and changes.Sometimes we need do something for rainy days.When I was 8 years old,I got severe influza.my parents send me to hospital and the medical costs are very expensive.If they hadn't saving monye in recent yearss would have not afford it.In consideration of future,like majority college graduate,to buy a flat in city is the necessary condition of living in cicy.It goes wiout saying that saving money is essential for our daily life. Second,sabing money is a guarantee for steable life.For most ordinary people,endowment ensurance, health care and their chidren's education still play significant roles in their life.Most people require saving money to invest their future.In our coutry,if old people didn't buy social security may cause they be in a poor conditon.IN this respect,we may as well say saving money is the key to have a decent life. Therefore,in my opinion,it's more advisable to saving money rather than waste money.In a word,savine money is more responsible to our life.
