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2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

发布时间:2013-05-17 00:23浏览次数:1114
要求:
Teacher‟s Day :    
1. 向老师致以节日的问候。   
2. 回忆件老师的教诲中难忘的事情。   
3. 我如何报答老师。
用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

Teachers' Day is coming soon.Please let me say "Happy Teachers' Day" to you. Simon was our oral English teacher in the middle school. When he came to the classroom for the first time, the British man gave us a very deep impression. His classes were very interesting and told us a lot of things about his life in England. Simon seemed to have no trouble and he always greets us with a big toothy smile. But he told us that he never stopped lose weight. One day when he entered the classroom, someone said to him he's getting thinner, he very happy and danced in a circle. He looked like a cute panda at the moment and we all laughed. His insistence can let a person from high school to a lot of . I think it lucky for us to have such a wonderful teacher. I will study well and become a teacher as well as a teacher.

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