小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳；句式偏短，建议加强复杂句的使用。

I have many good friend. Eddie is most kindly to me. he is a tall, thin boy. He like to dancing and singing. and also do that. so we became good friend. we always go to school toghter, and play. I just to say he is honestly, a busy day. holp you have a good day.