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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71628
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;作者使用词汇表达不够灵活,需要多使用一些高级词汇;使用了丰富的从句,但文中句式变化不够多样。

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if we want to know what is "Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission .",we should know what is "learning"'s authentic mean. as the saying goes live and learn,learning is something which well accompany ones during his his all life .it is an important ability that learning is.learning is a symbol that show you have the ability to make youself better and can make you wise and farsighted. learning also is a big treasure house for people.because we can learn,we can make our life more comfortable.because we can learn,we used our brain when we study that can make us health.

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