英语-日语 - 地盘 - 记录 - 日志 - 下载 - 擂台赛 - 查词 - 翻译 - 排行
  • 登录
  • 注册
  • 建议

      
  • 公告
  • 常见问题
您现在的位置:首页> 大学英语> 英语四级> 真题> 2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71628
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;从句使用熟练。

用户练习作文:

if we want to know what is "Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission .",we should know what is "learning"'s authentic mean. as the saying goes live and learn,learning is something which well accompany ones during his his all life .it is an important ability that learning is.learning is a symbol that show you have the ability to make yourself better and can make you wise and farsighted. learning also is a big treasure house for people.because we can learn,we can make our life more comfortable.because we can learn,we used our brain when we study that can make us health. So we should study hard and do our best ,in fast there are many old man in the world still study now.in Australia ,there has an old man who still study even he is 94 old and had obtain a master's degree in 2014 So as the saying goes "Learning is a daily experience and a lifetime mission ."

会员评论0个评论)
spz24680
金币:7

ta的空间

ta写的其它作文
更多
  • 1
ta本期其它用户练习作文
更多
得分:91.0coco99400

人气:86发布:2016-12-22

得分:88.5aixuexi1234

人气:26发布:2016-06-06

得分:88.5shymsky

人气:43发布:2016-11-16

得分:88.0Chrisinny

人气:76发布:2014-10-09

得分:88.02011213045

人气:74发布:2015-04-21