安徽黄山被联合国教科文组织定为世界自然文化遗产。假设外国友人到你校参观后,准备去旅游。
请根据要点向外国友人简单介绍黄山(the Yellow Mountain )。
(1)位于安徽南部,是中国著名的旅游胜地。每年有大批中外游客前去旅游观光。
(2)乘汽车去大约要花 3 个小时;也可以乘火车或飞机去。
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;从句使用稍显不足,注意个别句子错误。
Hello, my friend. I would like to introduce you a one of the spectacular sites in our country, which is named after the Yellow Mountain. It locates in the southern of Anhui province, where is virtually a restore that fit to have a tour in China, as a matter of fact, there are numerous visitors form aboard and home come to visit. It may approximately takes 3 hours to get there by bus, meanwhile, you can take train or plane. When you clime up the mountain, you can have a view of the spectacular scenery such as the sea of clouds ,wondrous pines, unique rocks as well as the beautiful sunset at morning.