小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；文中简单句过多，建议增加长句；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

i have a good friend. he has a big birght eyes and gray fur. he is brave man which do something that we dare to do . he has a beautiful girl friend. his girl friend is our classmate,we are very familiar with football. and i have a girl friend too.