小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；简单句偏多了；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

I have a good friend. he has a big bright eyes and gray fur. he is brave man who can do something that we dare to do . he has a beautiful girl friend. his girl friend is our classmate,we are very familiar with football. and i have a girl friend too.