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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71628
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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This story tell about a lady seen a “illegitimate baby” who born in the setting room. She saw the baby “his frail body was wrapped in bloodstained newspapers ” and “ She knew that she would never forget the sight of the baby, wrapped in stained newspapers and lying on the floor—it was a scene fit for a butcher shop. Toshiko, whose own life had been spent in solid comfort, poignantly felt the wretchedness of the illegitimate baby.” The heroine saw the baby very poor, thought of his own children will not be the same treatment. Other illegitimate children also have the same experience with the child? The findings made her uneasy. Upset she went for a walk in the park. See a tramp lying on the couch of the park, was covered by a newspaper, the newspaper let her think that was streaming with blood wrapped in a newspaper at the child, he grew up will be like the man in front?

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