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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强。
This story tells about a lady seen a “illegitimate baby” who born in the setting room. She saw the baby “his frail body was wrapped in bloodstained newspapers ” and “ She knew that she would never forget the sight of the baby, wrapped in stained newspapers and lying on the floor—it was a scene fit for a butcher shop. Toshiko, whose own life had been spent in solid comfort, poignantly felt the wretchedness of the illegitimate baby.” The lady saw the baby very poor, thought of his own children will been the same treatment? The other illegitimate children also have the same happened with the child? The findings made her uneasy. She feels upset so she walked in the park. Then she saw a homeless lying on the “bench” of the park, was covered by some newspapers, the newspapers let her to think that was streaming with blood wrapped in a newspaper at the baby, when he grew up will be like the man in front?
