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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33565
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误,尤其加强高级词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

Be Careful of Our Money There is a growing tendency these days for people being careful of our money.It seems to be a good habit.however,there still someone who think that doing like this is not so smart. As far as i am concerned,it is wise for us to be careful with money. Fisrtly,most us is busy at studing and have no chance to earn money.We still living dend on our parents.Earning money is not that easy for anyone.Secondly,if we use kinds of coupons and goupe-deals when shopping and eating out,it would save lots of money that we can cost them on other things.Thirdly,buying clothes in a sale must be the most wise choice for us,we can possess the clothes for a lower price than before,why don't we do that? In a word,being a smart consumer is the most valuable thing in the world.And there is no reason for us to spend extra money on meaningless thing.So i believe that we should be careful odf our money.

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