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Be Careful of Our Money There is a growing tendency these days for people being careful of our money.It seems to be a good habit.however,there still someone who think that doing like this is not so smart. As far as i am concerned,it is wise for us to be careful with money. Fisrtly,most us is busy at studing and have no chance to earn money.We still living dend on our parents.Earning money is not that easy for anyone.Secondly,if we use kinds of coupons and goupe-deals when shopping and eating out,it would save lots of money that we can cost them on other things.Thirdly,buying clothes in a sale must be the most wise choice for us,we can possess the clothes for a lower price than before,why don't we do that? In a word,being a smart consumer is the most valuable thing in the world.And there is no reason for us to spend extra money on meaningless thing.So i believe that we should be careful odf our money.