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Hi I am so glad to know that you are going to visit my hometown and it is my pleasure to introduce to you .Maybe you have heard Taiyuan before ,which is a gorgeous place.It is a city full of intersts and fun.As most people is konwn,Taiyuan is developed city therefore you can enjoy the fun of shopping and enjoy tasty food .