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my hometown is in Chongqing,it is also called big smoke.it is a modern city.there are many skyscrapers .at the same time,it has convenient transportation.its light rail is faster than the other vehicles in city.if you come here,i will take you to see zhangjiang river by light rail.if you come CQ, to eat hot pot is what you have to.