2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear Tom: welcome to my home town ,whic was named beijing.As is known to all , Beijing is a capital of China and is a beautiful city .I belived that you may fall in love if you come to beijing , because beijing is a old city ,which has history of 50000. There are lost of intersting placce ,such as The Great Wall,The Sunmmer place ,The Place Museum . I wii bring you go to The Great Wall if you cming,because The Great Wall is a the most interesting place in beijing .Just as saying goes "Not a true man unless he comes to The Great Wall". The Great Wall is about 7300 kilometre ,whicn is from yalu river to jia yu guan . In addition to ,beijing have mang delicious food ,for example beijing duck .If you want to eat beijing duck ,we can go to quan ju de . I am lookingforwd to you .