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Welcome to my beautiful hometown——Fenghuang,Elsa.Fenghuang town,is the one of trave places in the world.I will introduce it to you. First,there are some famous people and beauty.such as：Hang Yongyu, Xiong Xiling and Shen Chongwen,who wrote a novel,named BianCheng.If you read the novel,you could know the life what the local had.Second,there is a mountain to clumb,if you insisted to clumb the top of mountain,you could drunk the graceful water and enjoyed the nature what brought to you.Last but not least,you should learn the language of Miao and learn the culture of XiangXi.
