2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Withdrawing the development of society, more and more mobile phone has more fashionable. Telephones are everywhere,at home,in the classes,even in the washroom.Everyone has a mobile phone in their hand or packgae. A coin have two sides,does mobile phone as.The advantage is that you will be more convirnent when you are busy or upset,you may call your friends to play sports in the ground by mobile phone.or if you facing a dangrous on the home way,you can call your families to help you,instead of just yourself to face.The disadvantage is that you will spend less time to chat with your families,and spend more time to play games of mobile phone.If you overusing it,your eyes will be hurtn in the all time,and lost your original heart. mobile phone not only brings benefits a lot for you,but also can take a difference for your families.So be careful the mobile phone.