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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:38浏览次数:11306
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the increasing use of the mobile phone in people's life and then explain the consequences of overusing it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,高级词汇使用稍显不足;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Withdrawing the development of society, more and more mobile phones have more fashionable. Telephones are everywhere,at home,in the classes,even in the washroom.Everyone has a mobile phone in their hand or package. A coin has two sides,the mobile phone is the same .The advantage is that you will be more convenient when you are busy or upset,you may call your friends to play sports in the ground by mobile phone.Or if you facing a dangrous thing on the way of home,you can call your families to help you,instead of just yourself to face.The disadvantage is that you will spend less time in chating with your families,and spend more time in playing games of mobile phone.If you overusing it,your eyes will be damaged in the whole time,and lost your original heart. Mobile phone not only carries benefits a lot for you,but also can take indifference for your families.So,be careful to use the mobile phone.

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