2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识扎实，可适当增加从句的使用；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强。

If one of my foreign friend come to visit my hometown, I would introduce him the old-fashion street in the center of the downtown, Lufeng, Jia Zi. The reason why I make this decision may be as followed: At the top of the list, the old-fashion street in my hometown has a long history of about 100 years, there are full with various kinds of architectures which has been built for a long time. It's the best time to introduce him one kind of Chinese culture. Moreover, the street is the most prosperous place in my hometown, which can be a trademark of my home, as a matter of fact, it's proud for me to make a great impression for his visit. The last but not the least, there also have an overwhelming number of snacks, stores and bookshop with a great deal of literature from all over the world, I feel that he will show great fancy to them.