2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays,online shopping is more and more popular in the world,which bring a easier and swift life to our daily life. The positive of online shapping is saving our time,for that we can do more other import things,as well as we can have more choice on shopping.However,online shopping also have a negative effect, we may spand money but buy something was not good.What's more,it makes us being lazy to stay at home,we will become loneiness . From where I stand,I think it is more harm than good,shopping online can make us going out and have a relax.What's more,it is good to us to get close and have fun with our friends.Undoubtly,I strongly believe that shopping shouldn't online,just going out.