2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowadays, online shopping is more and more popular in the world, which brings an easier and swift life to our daily life. The positive of online shopping is saving our time, for that we can do more other import things, as well as we can have more choices on shopping. However, online shopping also has a negative effect, because we may spend money to buy something was not good. What's more, it makes us being lazy rather than stay at home,result in us become loney . From where I stand, I think it is more harmful than good,shopping online can make us go out and have a relaxation. What's more, it is good to us to get close and have fun with our friends. Undoubtly, I strongly believe that not shopping online, just going out.