2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

With the development of economy ,the living standard has great improvement .especially the advance of the internet our'sliving become more and more coveninent .but many of my peers as make use of internet imporperly are addicited in internet .for that reason ,they refuse to study hard. Why does the teenagers easily addicited in internet.I don't think that they have a strong will. During the long history in china ,the people who has strong will can finish the great assignment ,such as MAOZEDONG and SUNZHONGSHAN.they have a strong will in order to finish their goals .As a student, strong will is very improtant for us to overcome each diffcult in study and finally make greater progress. a strong will is helplful for us to become a upright optimistic active and enterprising people. After all, I certainly think that people who has a strong will can keep on seeking for their goal and never give up easily.