2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

With the development of economy ,the living standards has great improvement .especially the advance of the internet our life become more and more coveninent .But many of my peers as they make use of internet improper are addicted in internet .for that reason ,they refuse to study hard. Why does the teenagers easily addicted in internet.I don't think that they have a strong will. During the long history in china ,the people who has a strong will can finish the great assignment ,such as MAOZEDONG and SUNZHONGSHAN.They have a strong will in order to finish their goals .As a student, strong will is very important for us to overcome each difficulty in study and finally make greater progress. A strong will is helpful for us to become an upright optimistic active and enterprising people. After all, I certainly think that people who has a strong will can keep on seeking for their goal and never give up easily.