作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;在平时练习中应增加词汇量的积累;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
To: Mary Chen, From: Li Ming Date:Dce.23rd,2008 I will go to Beijing for a week tomorrow ,but the New Year’s Day ia coming ,I can’t discuss this festival with other workmates .So ,it’s the time for you to organize the people for the festival about how to hold a party .Finally ,tell me the time and place which you decide on and what you prepare .It is up to you to do this thing ,I think you will do it well. Yours, Li Ming