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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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作者能较好的使用一些高级词汇,同时要避免个别拼写错误;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章层次较为清晰。

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Immediately came to the conclusion There is a apperance in our society that we always easily make Conclusion according what we have heard or have seen. We completely believe our eyes and ears received things. at first, this appearance is decided by human recognize process. we touch things around us by our feeling organs. we learned a flower through eyes seeing and noise's smell to know the shape of flower and taste. At most time, we can know things just depend on our feeling organs. the feeling organs of a person include eyes, noise, ears,hands and tongue. these organs provided basic congnition condition for ancient and today's people. But with the development of human society, lots of things couldn't judge just rely on ears heared and eyes seen. in ancient time, people saw the phenomena that sun raise from east in the morning and fall to west at night, so they think naturally that sun circle around earth. But with the development of science and technology, we know earth circle around sun is a proved truth today. It's well known that human is a creature that with high-developed intelligence and learn ability , that made human quickly different from other creatures on earth. but it's conginitive ability is limited by itself. We review the history of human society development process, people always made these or those mistakens in the process of development. we just talk some appearances appeared in recent years, "the Great Cultural Revolution" is a movement happened in China recent year. thousands and millions people fight against each other according their behaviors and opinions to put label on each others. It's a rediculous period, the people in the whole China involved in a strange and unusual whirlpool,

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