作者词汇量积累不错,也能较好的使用一些高级词汇;文中衔接词丰富;作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
Diret came to the conclusion There is a phenomenon in our society that we always very easy make decision according what we have heared or have seen. we completely believe our eyes and ears received things. at first, this phenomenon is decided by human recognize process. we use our sense organs to know everything. A flower's shape and taste through our eyes and noise organ receive information then transport to our brain. At most time, we can know things just depend on our sense organs. the sense organs of a person include eyes, noise, ears,hands and tongue. these organs provided basic congnition condition for ancient and today's people. But with the development of human society, lots of things couldn't judge just rely on ears heard and eyes seen. in ancient time, people saw a phenomenon that sun raise from east in the morning and fall in west at night, so they naturally think that sun circle around earth. But with the development of science and technology, we know earth circle around sun is a proven truth today. It's well known that human is a creature who with high-developed intelligence and learn ability , which made human quickly different from other creatures on earth. but it's conginitive ability is limited by itself. We review the history of human society development process, people always made these or those mistakens in the process of development. we just talk some appearances appeared in recent years, "the Great Cultural Revolution" is a movement happened in China recent year.Thousands and millions people fight against each other according their behaviors and opinions to put label on each others. It's a strange period, the people in the whole China involved in a strange and unusual whirlpool, revolutioner,anti-revolutioner,the Left and the Right; every one couldn't escape the campaign, they must stand in line and facing other group members revolution. In today's people's opinion, these social phenomenon were complete fault. but at that time, people couldn't know which is right or wrong. So, we can say that what you have heard or seen couldn't make us clear know what is right or wrong. just as the proverbs that "There is much to be said on both sides ", every person have special social experience and growth process, we couldn't just judge a person with good or bad.
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