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拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅。
A beautiful city in China I believe the beautiful place that my hometown named Qing Dao will makes you happy. It may be briefly summed up as follows,To start with,there have many interesting things,such as beautiful coast and blue sky,most importantly,the fresh air if you breathe in that it can bring the feeling of relaxing.Besides,the local food is very delicious and I can give a dinner for you.I think we are standing in the beach and the wind swaying our face randomly that it is very wonderful. To summed up,welcome to my hometown.
