文章层次较为清晰;文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累高级词汇,拼写错误也要注意;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。
Teacher's day will coming,please allow me to express my blessing for you. I still can remember that I was failed in a exam.I was very sad moreover do not eat and drink.you looked and bring me to your office,you buy many foods and give me a hot water,then let me sit in frong of you ,anf said failure is the mother of success,and don't depress.you must face your failure,or you will not success.The sentence make me benefit for my life. Now,I am a normal students,I will try my best to learn more knowledge to rich myself,lastly,become a good teacher like you.