作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;文章层次较为清晰;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。
Teacher's day will coming, please allow me to express my blessing for you. I still can remember that I was failed in a exam. I was very sad moreover do not eat and drink. you looked and bring me to your office, you buy many foods and give me a hot water, then let me sit in frong of you , and said failure is the mother of success, and don't depress. you must face your failure, or you will not success. The sentence make me benefit for my life. Now, I am a normal students, I will try my best to learn more knowledge to rich myself, lastly, become a good teacher like you.