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采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，对拼写检查也要重视。
AS a great saying goes,"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it."Obviously,it coveys a simple but important mean that how to make our life more meaningful and colorful. Especially for our universally students,fredom time is enough ,therefore,make good use of the time is of great importance to our students.
