文章上下文衔接自然;作者使用词汇表达不够灵活,需要多使用一些高级词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
To see is to believe Nowadays, by the expelling of governing thoughts and culture, people are commonly apt to be obedient with the poularity. It is not a simple fact that seemed as the facet shows. To affirm the truth, it demands our heart linking with judgement. The sun just like a small fireball that hanging on the sky, as we all knows, but does it is small in deed?
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