2005年6月18日英语四级作文真题:教师节

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

Today is Teacher's Day,I hope Mr.Han can have a good day on this special festival.When you teached me you given me an unforgettable memeries.before you teaches me,I Heard that you are a very strict teacher,alway corporal punishment to the students.But when you teached me,you said you were older,angry injury body,so inthe later classes,you never got angry.So until now I still remerber you,and then I will study harder,trying not to let you down.