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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
缺少组织，上下文衔接稍显不流畅；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意文中的句子错误；作者高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。
Maybe someone think :the smartphone which offerend advantage for us.surely,I do not deny.If not it,we will feel boring and disadvantage ,the most pyoblem is communicate with person,if have not invent it,we may live the time that write somesthings to each other.Likewise,we will not to go shopping by net.we have not chance to learn that benefit knowledage and different culture from the world. but,Remembered,the coins have two slides.the smartphone as well. If you hand your smartphone longtimes,it will bring some healthy problem.maybe you can have a inslight or you will feel headache. of course,when you participate in a party,if you hand your smartphone until you are leaving,other people will angry. importantiy,you will miss good chance to meet some new friends. So,the smartphone is a sword which have two slides.you need to deal with it well.
