采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中单词拼写做的不错,另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮。
now, many pets are fashion, so many people like to feed a pet, because it is clever and beautiful. Absolutly, many students in university also want to get one. There would be a big problem, should pets be forbidden in dormitory? Some people think it is not a big problem, if someone who wants to get a pet, he should take good care of his pet, sometimes we can have
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