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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40875
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分56.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;简单句稍微有点多,可适当增加从句使用;文章词汇表达不够丰富,也请检查文章的单词拼写。

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Now, many pets are fashion, so many people like to feed a pet, because it is clever and beautiful. Absolutly, many students in university also want to get one. There would be a big problem, should pets be forbidden in dormitory? Some people think it is not a big problem, if someone who wants to get a pet, he should take good care of his pet, sometimes we can have a great sight, it should not be forbidden in dormitory. There is agreement oppion, so it must be some disagreement views. Another people do not like pets, they think the pets

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